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                   Stabbed      by Kaadzie Quaye,  Byron, California       nov07

One day my best friend Mimi and I were walking home from Aladinos on a late Saturday night. It was about nine fifteen at night and no one was out. The streets were quiet and not a peep was to be heard. We both were so excited for later that night because we had planned on going to Rock and Bowl with other close friends. We all were suppose to meet and star bucks, so Mimi and I decided to go to star bucks before we stopped by our house for some money. We were walking and singing with a box of pizza when we had finally reached the park across Windward Street. Our feet were throbbing so we decided to sit at the park and rest for a while. We sat there for about five minutes we started hearing noises. The bushes started moving and ruffling. Mimi jumped to her feet.      “What was that?” she screamed. “What noise?” I replied. Then finally I heard it. “Ok”, I said, “Heard that one” “ I know and it was scary”, Mimi said was a shaky voice.

All of a sudden we can hear some people talking and then it got louder and louder then we heard a low pitch scream it seemed like it was coming from far away, but it scared us so we started running so fast that we looked like lighting. I turned around to see if anyone was following us and that’s when I saw them. My oldest friends Sean, Dylan, and Robert were running away too. I stopped hoping that would catch up to us. They said,“ hey” and ran right past me. “Sean”, I screamed, “ what just happened back there?” “Just run”, he said back to me. I knew if Sean was running then it must be back so I booked it as fast as I can. We finally got past the bridge when I was so tried that I called my dad to come and pick me up at the bridge where he drove us back to my house. When I got home I was so scared that I didn’t even want to go to Rock and Bowl anymore but Mimi talked me into going. We called everyone and told all of our friends to meet us at my house instead of star bucks. Then my took us and after Rock and Bowl everyone spent the night at my house. In the morning when we all woke up my mom asked me, “did you hear the helicopter?” “When?” I replied. “Last night”, she said to me. “Nope” I said. We got dressed and went outside all my neighbors were coming up to me and asking me about what happened to the neighbor hoods bad boy last night. Then finally I found out. Darrel had been stabbed at the park across Windward Street. He was stabbed because he tried to take another mans cigarettes, and was stabbed at the seen. The man that stabbed him was named EJ. Darrel was sent to intensive care for three weeks. EJ was sent to jail for four months, but now he’s out so watch out!
 

 

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